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Tuesday, August 7, 2018

Heads Up It's Adventure Time!

Here is my recount that I wrote. I have been working on my proofreading. I have been learning about personification and have tried to have it in my work. I also am learning to use speech marks. I hope you enjoy my story. I think I still need to work on using speech marks correctly.
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  1. Lana GiesbersAugust 7, 2018 at 8:24 PM

    Hi Mahina, what an exciting experience that was! Now, well done on your success. I see two examples of personification as well as speech marks. Very good. I would like you to read your recount out aloud and see if it makes sense to pause where you have placed your full stops.

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