Mahina, I really enjoyed reading this story. You added some great detail such as a cat with a mouse who didn't know what to do with it. Some good use of speech marks and a great ending. To improve you should carefully read over your work as some words have wrong ending or are not the word you wanted to say. Keep up the good work.
Mahina, I really enjoyed reading this story. You added some great detail such as a cat with a mouse who didn't know what to do with it. Some good use of speech marks and a great ending. To improve you should carefully read over your work as some words have wrong ending or are not the word you wanted to say. Keep up the good work.
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