Mahina I really enjoyed reading your recount about graduation. You have really taken risks with your choice of words. Well done. You also show you are consistent with basic punctuation. Your next step could be paragraphing and forming sentences to show the building of suspense. Keep up the great work.
Mahina I really enjoyed reading your recount about graduation. You have really taken risks with your choice of words. Well done. You also show you are consistent with basic punctuation.
ReplyDeleteYour next step could be paragraphing and forming sentences to show the building of suspense. Keep up the great work.