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Wednesday, August 19, 2020

NORTHLAND FLOODS

 For writing, We have been learning about report writing so we have chosen to do the report writing on The Northland Floods. Here is my writing about the Northland Flood. Also, we have been learning about third person, and cut and pasting then writing it in our own words.

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2 comments:

  1. Cool Mahina. Yes, you were learning to paraphrase INSTEAD of cutting and pasting. You have written in your own words and your paragraphs are grouped into main ideas, well done. Next step lead sentences and variety of sentences types to add sophistication to your work. Keep up the good work.

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  2. thank you whaea Lana

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